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I want to bottle this feeling up
And sell it to myself in the morning
Grossly overpriced with no family discount.
For the status symbol it implies.

I want to be selfish enough to buy it.
With the delusion that if it works
Everything will be better.
Buying it will make all the doubt,
Self-loathing, disgust and mistrust disappear......

I want to bottle this feeling up
And sell it to myself in the morning....
When I'm too stingy to cough up the cash.
This is a poem I wrote a long while ago, I still really like it, so I thought I'd post it.

As always, thoughts/interpretations/opinions are always welcome!
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pfgoldfish13 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
LOVELOVELOVE IT.  I HAVE NO WORDS.
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WeirdAndLovely Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm so glad you loved it!  :blush:

Thank you SOOO much for the faves!
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pfgoldfish13 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm so glad you wrote it :)

Anytime!
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Breath-of-Nefertari Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014
"Grossly overpriced with no family discount.
For the status symbol it implies."


These are my favorite two lines. Clap

One minor thing I noticed: the eighth line has a space in the word "the."
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WeirdAndLovely Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:nod: Thank you!

Aw, crap.  Thank you for letting me know! I'll fix it right away.
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Breath-of-Nefertari Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014
No problem! xD
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014
Remember that bottling up feelings is not healthy at all. Because the bottle might explode someday.
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WeirdAndLovely Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Um.. Metaphorical bottling, like one does with beer, not bottling up emotions in the conventional sense. ^^;

Thank you for the favorite!
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014
Hehe, that was the joke :D

You're welcome.
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WeirdAndLovely Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh. Oops. ^_^
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