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I want to bottle this feeling up
And sell it to myself in the morning
Grossly overpriced with no family discount.
For the status symbol it implies.

I want to be selfish enough to buy it.
With the delusion that if it works
Everything will be better.
Buying it will make all the doubt,
Self-loathing, disgust and mistrust disappear......

I want to bottle this feeling up
And sell it to myself in the morning....
When I'm too stingy to cough up the cash.
This is a poem I wrote a long while ago, I still really like it, so I thought I'd post it.

As always, thoughts/interpretations/opinions are always welcome!
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Breath-of-Nefertari Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  New member
"Grossly overpriced with no family discount.
For the status symbol it implies."


These are my favorite two lines. Clap

One minor thing I noticed: the eighth line has a space in the word "the."
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WeirdAndLovely Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:nod: Thank you!

Aw, crap.  Thank you for letting me know! I'll fix it right away.
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Breath-of-Nefertari Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014  New member
No problem! xD
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014
Remember that bottling up feelings is not healthy at all. Because the bottle might explode someday.
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WeirdAndLovely Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Um.. Metaphorical bottling, like one does with beer, not bottling up emotions in the conventional sense. ^^;

Thank you for the favorite!
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014
Hehe, that was the joke :D

You're welcome.
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WeirdAndLovely Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh. Oops. ^_^
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014
:)
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